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posted 11th Jan 2013, 9:20 AM

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11th Jan 2013, 9:20 AM

Jetyl

and there goes the blueness

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11th Jan 2013, 11:07 AM

Owen (Odmo) MacRae

I can only predict what will follow...

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11th Jan 2013, 6:08 PM

ranger_brianna_new

Just a suggestion--you should probably begin to differentiate between the thickness of objects and the thickness of panels. The door on the "half an hour later" panel looked like a break in the panels, which was slightly disorienting.

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12th Jan 2013, 1:45 AM

Jetyl

yeah I know, I noticed it when I was drawing. for stuff like I try to put word bubbles or something to show its not a panel break, but that one just didn't happen. you can tell I made the stem on the speech buble extra long to show it wasn't a panel break, but I guess that didn't really work

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12th Jan 2013, 2:10 PM

ranger_brianna_new

It did, but it was a delayed reaction. I could tell from their interactions that it was the same panel, but it took a moment to register. :P

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