and there goes the blueness
I can only predict what will follow...
Just a suggestion--you should probably begin to differentiate between the thickness of objects and the thickness of panels. The door on the "half an hour later" panel looked like a break in the panels, which was slightly disorienting.
yeah I know, I noticed it when I was drawing. for stuff like I try to put word bubbles or something to show its not a panel break, but that one just didn't happen. you can tell I made the stem on the speech buble extra long to show it wasn't a panel break, but I guess that didn't really work
It did, but it was a delayed reaction. I could tell from their interactions that it was the same panel, but it took a moment to register. :P