pg6

posted 6th Jan 2013, 10:04 AM

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6th Jan 2013, 10:04 AM

Jetyl

ugh, i hated making though windows on the building. took forever....

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7th Jan 2013, 3:29 AM

mheanne27

I don't like it too, but I don't hate it that much.
Characters are the only enjoying to draw right :)

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7th Jan 2013, 12:11 PM

Jetyl

i agree with that, but those windows were worse because just how long they took plus i found a faster way to make them after i finished this page

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8th Jan 2013, 11:11 PM

ranger_brianna_new

In the last panel, "once their in" should be "once they're in".


Will say this, though--lots of the mistakes you make wouldn't be caught by spellcheckers, thanks to a little pain in the English language we call "Grammar". :P

And also, lots of the mistakes are actually mistakes I'd actually make, to the point where I often had to check Google to confirm they were right/wrong since I myself wasn't sure. :P

Butyeah. If you need any grammar thing which you're unsure on explained, you can always ask me. I'm not the best expert on the subject, but I'm fairly well-versed in it, so I can generally help out.

For instance, any of the typos I pointed out; I could elaborate on them if requested, but preferred not to in the comment itself since they sound obnoxious (well, more obnoxious than I already am... :P) when I do them automatically.

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