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posted 17th Nov 2012, 8:33 AM

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17th Nov 2012, 8:33 AM

Jetyl

yay! more talking about furries...

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7th Jan 2013, 1:43 AM

ranger_brianna_new

I'm running out of ways to apologize for pointing out technicalities. :P

"its probably that furry kid" is missing the apostrophe.
"unless of course" is "unless of course". You got the r and t backwards on "attractive", which has two ts according to spellcheck.

"peoples fetishes" is also missing an apostrophe. I'm not entirely sure of this myself, but I think it can be either "people's" or "peoples'", depending on the situation (sometimes, even I hate English :P), though I think "people's" is more appropriate.

I think when you said "uncortable", you meant "uncomfortable".

And (oh dear gods please don't hate me) "were talking about" should be "we're talking about".

(Blasted English. :P)

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