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posted 14th Aug 2013, 4:00 AM

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14th Aug 2013, 4:00 AM

Jetyl

this was an interesting page to make, because I realized as I finished this page and started the next, it was felt very unnecessary, kinda just filler.

so why'd I keep it. well for starters the fun, but obvious foreshadowing with the gunshot, and more characterization for Sarah, as Sarah's an interesting one to write for.

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