fun fact, this was suposed to be the prologues end, but i realized it made more sense to just have the entire boat trip in the prologue rather that making that chapter 1
It's an easy thing to miss, but "body secrets" should be "body secretes".
(At least I have *one* comment which is not typo-hunting... :P)
You spelled orientation right! Yay! Also, I find this hilarious. c: