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posted 6th Jul 2013, 4:00 AM

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6th Jul 2013, 4:00 AM

Jetyl

and now back to the B plot....

oh also, I've realized I hate the exterior shots of the Rainy Hill Apartments (panel 3) because of the annoying windows I always try to show, but now I just say Fuck it its not worth it, so now the windows will not appear on the broad shots of the apartments.

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6th Jul 2013, 9:44 AM

NOT MALISTATICY

Not to offend, but I think you should spend a bit more time on your comics.

The art would look better if you put a more variety in the outline widths.
You also draw your outlines as you would a black and white, pencil drawn, grainy type comic.

But how many colors you use, and the gradient based shading, says they should be more ink pen, non grainy, digitaly type of way.
Like I said, not trying to offend.
Just my two cents.

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7th Jul 2013, 10:01 AM

Jetyl

no offese taken, but I already spend like all my free time on this, so I'm not sure how I could spend more :P

I draw the outlines like that because the comics hand drawn in pencil, then inked, then scanned, then cleaned up of errors, then colored digitally on paint.net (I'm very cheap :P)

also if important note, I have a huge buffer. the new pages I'm posting now I finished months ago from my perspective so any critiques or suggestions you have won't be implemented (if I can even implement them) for months from your perspective.

that said, I enjoy hearing peoples opinions when it comes to the comic, so thanks.

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